Looks really great! My main critique is just a lighting one, and it's actually pretty small. On the bent arm you have shading on both the forearm and the upper arm (as if the forearm was casting a shadow on the upper arm) but actually since the fire is going more to her left, it would be shining directly onto the upper arm, unobstructed by the forearm.

Also, actually, now that I look... The forearm wouldn't be casting a shadow on the chest like that either. As it looks right now, it implies that the light source is on the left (ours), since the shadow is being cast down/right onto the shirt. She'll still have the side shadow, but it should just go from like the breasts down, not follow the contour of the hand.


Anyway, really easy stuff to fix I guess. I like this! And for the record, the shirt design fits really well, don't change it! Haha.

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Figuratively speaking, of course.

Thank you so much for the C&C!!!! I'll definitely go in and work with that a little bit today

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~life has to end. love doesn't.~

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real sweet dude.

Hehe, thanks!

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~there's nothing in this world that you can't be if you want it enough~

~life has to end. love doesn't.~

~the dog was created especially for children. he is the god of frolic.~

anytime!!!!! :] :]

Yaaaaay it looks awesome now! :>

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Figuratively speaking, of course.

Thank you so much for the advice

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~there's nothing in this world that you can't be if you want it enough~

~life has to end. love doesn't.~

~the dog was created especially for children. he is the god of frolic.~

It's a nice atmospheric picture, but there are also a few things that could be better, I think.

First, the jeans (as I suppose) and the belt are very contasting with upper rest of picture, toned in darker colors. Jeans itself looks as they are made of plastic, shading is too bright and concentrated in small area, while it should be spreaded on bigger area.

Also shade under the breasts and their very curve looks a bit weird...like as they are struck by something just in area where the shade is. I don't know how to explain it exactly, sorry

But after all, this picture really has his charm
Good luck with your next additions.

ooooo

i really like this =]

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